Saturday, July 16, 2005

Tanka

Fog falls from heaven
Clouds melting in the sunrise
Forming pools of dreams
In the valleys of green grass
While the wind whispers hushhhh, hushhhh

1 Comments:

Blogger J.L.Decker said...

I really like this one. It's almost like a haiku. I'm plunged right into the image and swallowed by its style. Excelent poem. Simple images can often capture the sublime more clearly in a way longer poems fail. Nice work!

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